This is a lot better @agsst and I appreciate how you've taken on board advice. I'll be happy to let you back into the community next week if you keeping making this effort. Don't forget to comment on other people in the community.

I find people are more likely to support you when you share personal stories - no one needs to read about things we can easily find on the internet, but we love personal struggles and wins about your life. Read a few other good posts in the community to see what makes for good content. I look forward to supporting you more and helping you grow.