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RE: She Had Lost to An Unprofessional Cook.

in The Ink Well9 days ago (edited)

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This is nicely done, @jazclassic. Especially charming was the way you worked in the prompt. Unfortunately, curation was reduced because of several avoidable errors that could have been caught with more careful proofing.

A few examples:

Ariel had consider herself The best in the kitchen

Should read Ariel had considered herself

Or this one:

She was known as the goddess of kitchen utensils, women would envy her, men chased after her

Should read:
She was known as the goddess of kitchen utensils. Women would envy her, men chased after her

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We look forward to reading more of your stories.

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Thanks 😊 for the correction 💓