
This is nicely done, @jazclassic. Especially charming was the way you worked in the prompt. Unfortunately, curation was reduced because of several avoidable errors that could have been caught with more careful proofing.
A few examples:
Ariel had consider herself The best in the kitchen
Should read Ariel had considered herself
Or this one:
She was known as the goddess of kitchen utensils, women would envy her, men chased after her
Should read:
She was known as the goddess of kitchen utensils. Women would envy her, men chased after her
We offer these suggestions to help you improve your effective writing skills.
We look forward to reading more of your stories.
Thank you