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RE: Iron beans

in The Ink Well10 months ago

You do a good job of arousing curiosity in the reader, @kingsleyy. What must these iron beans taste like? You set the scene well, and describe the evolution of Ezekiel's interest effectively. This is a good arc, although it's an unlikely arc--all about beans.

Thank you for sharing this with us, @kingsleyy