hello @rafzat You tell an interesting story with a nice arc, however, your piece needs more balance. It is entirely narrative and would benefit from dialogue to give us more insight into each of the characters through their interactions. It would also benefit from using an online editor like Grammarly to identify and correct issues with spellings, tense, and punctuation. Making these changes to your writing and process would most likely yield you higher curation rewards. Take a look at the resources in this post for ways to develop your fiction writing skills.

Catalogue of Fiction Writing Tips

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