It is a good story. Quite emotional. There are a few little things in there, but it can happen to anyone. Sometimes we don't see our own mistakes when we're writing... It's happened to me many times. The best thing to do is to ask someone to read what you wrote before you publish it, but of course someone you know won't read just for the sake of reading.

On the other hand, there are parents who make the serious mistake of pushing their children away when they make a mistake... When in reality the mistake may be theirs for not preparing and educating their children well, even when it comes to sex and thus preventing unwanted pregnancies and diseases.

I liked the story.