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RE: Fiction: A good start. Children's Story. Original content. ESP/EN.

in The Ink Welllast year

Wow! I really love the end part where she got to take great decisions again avoiding competitions with her teams. Competition would happen but that when staged. Not just seeing herself competing naturally instead of giving her best. Thanks for the amazing write ✍️

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Hi @abdul-qudus, thank you very much for the comment.
If the idea is that he enjoyed sports and friendships and that he gave his best in competitions, without seeing the other teammates as rivals.
Those values imposed by Hollywood movies, of competence, ego and supremacy usually end up hurting children, who feel frustrated if they are not the best, and end up causing envy and conflict.The story suggests that there is another way to see life and do things.
Thanks for the comment.