I love this snook.
And especially the way you personify the earth so well in the scene you describe π
You also definitely achieved what you set out to do π as the second draft was tighter and more concise in its descriptions.
Well done π
P.s. I hope your week has improved as it sounds like you had a rubbish time.
Thank You raj808!!!!
I had fun trying to keep the essence of what I wrote yet to make it easier to read. I am happy you liked it too!!
My week is getting there... A few more Doctor visits and, hopefully, things will start looking up :D I just need to remember that writing helps get rid of a lot of stuff floating in your mind :D
Yes, writing can definitely be a healing and cathartic activity.
I'm glad it brought you some relief from your health struggles.
I'm sending virtual hugs, healing vibes and !LUV π€ π
