hello @virabee, this feels more like a creative non-fiction than a fiction story. There is nothing wrong with that but we ask because it affects how a curator reads your story. Is this piece based on a true story or is it fiction as tagged?
Some synchronicity blended with difference is good for relationships. It makes them interesting. Your piece doesn't really introduce any conflict, aside from your MC's concerns as to whether she and Carmen will have anything in common. You may wish to read the following resource in The Ink Well which provides some guidance on handling conflict in stories and therefore creating a stronger arc.
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There was also a leap from the two girls talking about their interest in flowers from different perspectives, to this: "To my surprise, I found that despite having distinct interests, both of us shared a mutual passion for helping others." - there was nothing shared in the story to this point that suggested that either shared a passion for helping others, and nothing added after this to support the statement. It felt a little oddly placed as a result. Your story needs a little more development so that we have a greater understanding of the characters - we want to see them and feel their emotions, and not only be told about them. A slightly longer piece would have allowed you to flesh some of these things out.
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